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Shiver

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I want you
to give me a reason why I shouldn't
fight the way I feel about you
I need to hear
your voice telling me it's okay
I want you to feel
the way I shiver
whenever I think of you and me
just because it's so wrong
but feels so terribly right
I think I am just scared
of becoming a person
who will be more weak than I am now
you're scaring me
but I adore you nonetheless
So give me a reason
to believe in what we could be
My first entry in the contest of the great club :iconacid-burst-love-fed:. I found out ( in time :w00t:) they have one of their 72 hour contests going on. Subject is Shiver.
I got inspiration (kinda much actually, more poems will be coming up) et voila :D
This is one of the the results :aww:
Hope you guys like it ^^

Oh one more thing: this is still expressing my own emotions. I probably wouldn't be able to write this if it wasn't :aww:
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Kit-Kat-Choco's avatar
It's absolutely beautiful hun' :heart:
I wanna hug you right now >.< aaaaaaaawwwww
I'm very proud of you ^^